Nowadays people often go out with a time frame to buy their essential household things, which has resulted in building of many new mega malls. This situation has affected the business of many small local store. However, i believe that supermarket provides more benefits to people than the small individual stores in many ways.
To begin with, one of the most important thing about a supermarket is a one stop thing, that is, you can get every thing from household to clothing to electronics and more at a single place. This saves a lot of time of an individual. As it is known that, in this fast paced life every one is in a hurry and these malls help people by saving that time will be otherwise utilized in roaming between different individual stores. For instance, in India, people staying in a small town, makes a trip to the nearest city mall once a month and stock things up until for next month, which saves them a lot of time.
Another benefit of having a mega mall is that along with these daily need items, they have gaming zones, entertainment centers and cafeteria, where people can enjoy with their friends and family too. Such big investments brings in a lot of employment opportunities. Also, taxes are quiet high at such places and these are paid towards the clothes and food, which is indirectly going to help the citizens to get better facilities like hospitals, schools and transportation.
On the other side buying from the small stores is quiet time consuming, as a person has to go from one stores to another for buying different items which do not seem feasible. However local shops are accessed by people when there is a need to buy an individual product or a group of similar products.
In conclusion, as mentioned before, time is the most valuable thing in this fast life, supermarket provides a lots of benefits when compared to the small shops. Other than time, a lot of refreshing activities are also quiet attractive for the people of all age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71264367816 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56187145683 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.918304383 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.142857143 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108783535797 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457541883581 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463050863182 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658734939838 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445653186336 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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