You had arranged to meet a friend next week, but you have realised that you will not be able to go.
Cancel the meeting with your friend and apologise
– explain why you will not be able to meet your friend
– suggest where and when you could see each other instead.
Dear Naina,
I'm extremely sorry to tell you that it will not be possible for me to meet you next week as we had planned. I know it's a last minute change, but there is something important came up, which is significant and can't be avoided in any case.
Let me explain it to you. I hope you forgive me once you hear out my reasons. Actually, yesterday i got a call from my elder sister and got to know that her flights to Canada are confirmed for the coming Monday, which she had been trying since long now. You see she will be away from India for the next 3 years to complete her higher education in Canada, so me and my parents are going to Punjab to meet her before she fly away. Now you understand how critical time it is for me and my family, and i can't really give up a chance to meet my dear sister, as i won't be able to see her for least next 3 years after this.
Sorry again, i know you would understand my situation and forgive me.
Lets plan to meet in the last week of this month. What do you say? same place ?
I eagerly waiting for your reply on this.
Regards
Harpreet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Naina, Im extremely sorry to tell you that it wil...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...you next week as we had planned. I know its a last minute change, but there is some...
^^^
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rtant came up, which is significant and cant be avoided in any case. Let me expla...
^^^^
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ear out my reasons. Actually, yesterday i got a call from my elder sister and got...
^
Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...al time it is for me and my family, and i cant really give up a chance to meet my...
^
Line 5, column 501, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... time it is for me and my family, and i cant really give up a chance to meet my dear...
^^^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ext 3 years after this. Sorry again, i know you would understand my situation ...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...erstand my situation and forgive me. Lets plan to meet in the last week of this m...
^^^^
Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Same
...st week of this month. What do you say? same place ? I eagerly waiting for your ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, really, so, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13488372093 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10476120232 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5392065518 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8181818182 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315010859702 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119102973609 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977710581405 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165121291223 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081676851087 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.