The internet has made knowledge immediately available to people through computer and smartphone all around the world. Much of this knowledge also free. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.
Due to technological advancement, individuals can surf internet to get ample amount of information instantly by using gadgets like smartphone and computer globally and maximum of the details are available on internet is free of cost. However, utilising this resource has its disadvantages as well. Both the merits and demerits of using internet are discussed in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, to deal with the positive aspects of internet, it is an accepted fact that internet has helped millions of people to learn about the things which were unknown to them even a decade ago. Its access has helped the students to gain knowledge on the subjects who could not afford to go to school or hire a private teacher. For instance, in a recent research it is a proven fact that, the literacy percentage in rural areas of India (in spite of having less educational institute) has increased to 40% due to the internet facility provided by government. In addition, Internet has made the information very effective through videos and colourful contents which people find very interesting than studying text books which is very monotonous.
On the other hand, the flip side of the internet is people get confused with abundance of information and sometimes the data available on internet can mislead a person because, it may not be genuine all the time. Moreover, hackers can use malware software thorough internet to steal one’s personal data such as, banking information which can be a threat to their hard earned money. Furthermore, Children can easily access to some adult sites, which will have a bad impact on them.
In conclusion, the information available on internet has its own merits and help students in various way, but the drawbacks cannot be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, look, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0819112628 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80032829808 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600682593857 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7919212041 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.363636364 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6363636364 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197472905566 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686644653166 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413200034576 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110159574559 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510736117909 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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