People should buy things made in their own country, even if the price is higher than the same things made elsewhere
Nowadays, we are in the era of global economic globalization and we can buy commodities from different countries. Many people argue that we should support products that made in our own country as a consequence of patriotism, even though the price is higher than the same thing made in other countries. I think that there are many factors might determine a consumer’s choice, but none of these factors should be related to the place where the product is made.
For me, the golden standard to judge a product is its cost-effectiveness. If it has high quality and a relatively low price, it satisfies my expectation and is worth the money I spend. On the other hand, the nationality of the product is of little concern. In a globalized world, it is naive to believe that one product is entirely made in just one country. If we open up our smartphones, we would find components made in the US, China, South Korea, Japan, and so on. The division of international labor has determined most, if not all, consumer goods depend on the efforts of many, not just a single country. As a result, the notion that we need to buy domestic products sounds preposterous.
Second, any effort to boycott products made in other countries would backfire. Protectionism is the utmost barrier to free trade. Suppose the people in one country all refuse to buy imported products, other countries would have no intention to buy the products made in this country as well. With no trade going on, the economy of the country would suffer. Before opening up in the late 1970s, the Chinese economy had been stagnating for years largely because of its refusal to importing and exporting consumer goods. It was only after China had become an important buyer and manufacturer of international business that its economy began to take off.
Last but not least, every country has its edge in the production of certain products. As consumers, we should care more about how some of the products can meet our needs and facilitate our life rather than where it is produced. If a person with a low budget decides to buy a car, a Prius will sound more plausible than a Mustang but for another person who cares more about speed and horsepower, the latter is better. Goods made in all the countries are not mutually exclusive; rather, they should be traded freely to satisfy the demands of a variety of people with a wide range of penchants.
In a nutshell, the idea of only buying domestic goods is simply misleading and trouble-causing.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-09-13 | stereoData | 90 | view |
| 2017-08-23 | edithlee | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, well, i think, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78341013825 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78123102663 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536866359447 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3801578092 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8571428571 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282082773777 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727288354763 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114034974045 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14718662381 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110908294389 0.0645574589148 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27 Out of 30
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