Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring it to your concern about a system malfunction which is severely affecting my work. As you are aware, our company recently adopted ‘On Board network Software’ in all computers to make our work more efficient and productive. However, it turned out as malware to our website and making all other application in the hardware to get deleted automatically. Further, re installing all programs is hindering speed and resulting energy draining of the battery.
Targets of this month are crucial and I am unable to give my full efforts because of glitch caused by new computer application. Apart, I am running behind my schedule as all time invested for making data is becoming waste and had to start everything from scratch. Tickets raised to IT teams for resolving issue is not helpful as they are too busy in attending my complaint. As a result, I had to use earlier methods which is not safe as they are already obsolete for our purpose.
Kindly, instruct technological team to address my situation either by providing new laptop which is compatible for present working conditions or by giving me direct access to parent website where online portal is flexible for all sort of works. For the time being they can let me to use third party software which is safe and reliable.
Thanks for taking time to read this letter and hoping for positive outcome.
Yours faithfully,
Mr Jenkins.
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 89
- You recently did a short cookery course The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you ve done since 87
- Essay topics: You are an employee in an office, working on one big project together with your colleagues. Write a letter to your manager to inform him/her that some of the employees make mistakes that affect your work. In your letter say- What mistakes ha 78
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced 89
- Some people think it s better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them Other people believe it s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 87
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, third, sort of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90163934426 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67101203559 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647540983607 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3249992815 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151873529916 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560785784717 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496985488547 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878009302708 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313818325121 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.