Dear Sir,
My name is Jane and my employee ID is 432267. I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the issue with a desktop that I am being faced at the office. There was a problem with screen resolution and UPS. These have occurred since last month and I already told the team leader many times, still no progress on it.
Let me explain the complications thoroughly. Firstly, when I switch on the system, the screen goes blank for some time, afterward, it got fluctuate and some thin black lines appear on it. Moreover, after a couple of minutes, the screen gets back into the original position. By this, most of the time gets wasted and also causes a delay in delivering the work. Secondly, when the electricity goes off, the computer suddenly shuts down because the attached UPS is not working. So, the work which I was doing at that time, get lost. Consequently, this is putting a bad impact on my work and performance.
It would be great if you address the above-said issues as soon as possible so that I can deliver my work on time. I suggest you to kindly, replace the defected parts of the computer. I shall be very thankful to you.
I look forward to your prompt response.
Yours Sincerely,
Jane Shore
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uter. I shall be very thankful to you. I look forward to your prompt response. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56306306306 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49444232501 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3601910029 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.3125 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.875 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224652720005 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639345689932 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497277290057 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115956341568 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442253594332 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.