You stayed over at a friend’s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there.
Thank your friend
Describe your watch
Tell them what you want them to do
Hello Rohit,
I hope you are enjoying summer vacations. I am writing this letter regarding my wrist watch that I probably left in your home last weekend during stay
First of all, I want to thank you and appreciate your efforts for making my stay comfortable and enjoyable in your home. Two days passed quite soon and I am really missing your mother's handmade stuff naan and evening snacks, especially corn and cheese sandwich with masala tea.
During my stay I was carrying my wrist watch alongside and I think I might forget while leaving your home. The wrist watch is of dark black colour with orange outline chrome. It is actually a smart watch with traditional look. My grandfather gave it to me on my 18th birthday.
I request you to please search it in your home once carefully. You can start search from left cupboard in your bedroom, I think it has to be there. If you will able to find it then please courier it to my address.
I hope you will find it in our home and I am positive about it. I am looking forward for your positive revert.
Yours lovingly,
Anuj Vijj
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, look, really, regarding, so, then, while, as to, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53535353535 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34378262825 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3044177038 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0769230769 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341669530447 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118597497735 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083800777492 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193473022822 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622549284282 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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