Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Rapid change of weather is a heated debate in current world. Many people believe in the necessity of finding ways to live our lives with the change of climate without taking any steps to protect it. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this view as it will lead the mankind towards massive climate disasters such as global worming.
Accelerated climate change caused by human activities has its detrimental consequences. Before the industrial era, the level of environmental pollution was significantly lower than the industrial era. Moreover, we are continuously taking advantage of our environment and damaging it more and more. For example, emission of green house gases from automobiles polluting the air and also gradually increasing the global temperature. In addition, Researchers already warned that if we are keeping damaging our climate like this, world will not be livable for our future generation. Therefore, as responsible inhabitants of this world, everyone should contribute to protect our environment.
Weather change has its troll in each and every aspect of our life. Rise of global temperature leads to melt the polar ice and such increasing the water level of ocean. As a result, environmental disaster likes tornado, hurricane and tsunami happening in increasing frequency than before. Additionally, continuous deforestation and increase in global temperature are making our planet desert on one side and posing in risk for wild fire on the other side. So, even if we want to live our life adjusting with all these environmental changes, it would not possible for long run. Moreover, to live a healthy life at least we need clean air and pure water which are becoming hard to get in some part of the world. Hence, we should do everything possible to prevent climate chance.
In conclusion, people have different views and concerns about their environment. Although some people consider a small step from every citizen can give us a beautiful planet, others are more prone towards ignoring the fact. I believe, we can build a livable world by some simple act like reducing the amount of green house gases, planting trees and so on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... house gases, planting trees and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19088319088 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83856206533 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609686609687 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4981101794 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.8947368421 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4736842105 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177014431337 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531005367075 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506256833547 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111862459266 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397210323399 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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