The pie charts illustrate the percentage of divese factors that make women and men happy. From the graph, it can be clearly seen that both women and men are happy when achieving at work ; however , the things that make them happy are quite different.
Looking at the details , ove one-third (37%) of the things that make women happy belongs to the time spending with family. As mentioned above, both gender feel pleasured with achievement at work, this accounted for 25%. As forbother factors and financial security , the percentage made up 15% and 12%, respectively. Just approximately one-tenth goes on good appearance that makes women happy.
Regarding what makes men happy, the proportion of other factors and achievement at work constituted half the chart. There are nearly equal percentage of doinng hobbies and supporting a successful sports team , which are respectively 17% and 18%. The smallest segment is financial security with 15%.
Overall, both men and women are happy with achievement at work , financial security and other factors.
- Charts of survey result about what men and women say makes them most happy. 48
- Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome curtural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
These pie chart indicate
These pie chart indicate proportions of subject which provoke funny time for men and women in to separate figures.
There are similarities and significant differences, achievement at work is common point for both sexes by 25%, moreover, this shows almost the most proportion among the others. In the next step financial security is one of the majority in common proportion by 12% for women and 15% for men. Being with family is the most prominent amount by more than a third for women while it is not existence for men, instead, Supporting a successful sport team is another popular subject among men (18%).
On the other hand, care about the appearance always have been an important subject for female and it has occupied 11% of the chart, also doing hobbies for men is another popular subject for this group by 17%. The remain percentage goes for other factors which is not determined, it is 15% for women and 25% for men.
both gender feel pleasured
both genders feel pleasured
things that make women happy belongs to the time spending with family.
things that make women happy belong to the time spending with family.
Sentence: As forbother factors and financial security , the percentage made up 15 and 12, respectively.
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Sentence: The pie charts illustrate the percentage of divese factors that make women and men happy.
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Sentence: Looking at the details , ove one-third 37 of the things that make women happy belongs to the time spending with family.
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Sentence: As forbother factors and financial security , the percentage made up 15 and 12, respectively.
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Sentence: There are nearly equal percentage of doinng hobbies and supporting a successful sports team , which are respectively 17 and 18.
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