Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are different views about how people satisfy their career life. While I believe this can be implemented by selecting an occupation early and staying the same job, I also argue changing job on a frequent basis might be a good option for individuals getting satisfaction on their career path.
To begin with, I consider that people should choose a career early and continue doing it to get a satisfying career life for several reasons. Firstly, this results in the improvement of young workers' living standards. For example, fresh graduates getting a job as soon as graduating have more opportunities to own a car or an apartment with their soon accumulated incomes. Therefore, this gives them more motivation and keep moving forward in career ladder. Moreover, staying the same job for a long time often opens the door for employees to get a higher promotion, such as being promoted to a leader. Consequently, when these people find it their efforts to be admited, they would become satisfactory in their job.
However, I argue it is likely to be a decent choice to get satisfaction in working life when individuals frequently switch to new jobs. Firstly, through doing this way, people have the ability to be more versatile and innovative. To be specific, workers are required to develop their creative thinking and sharpen their skills to adapt changes in new environment, which might be appropriate to those who tend to faces challenges to achieve their career goals. Secondly, in fact there are a large number of people trying different jobs in order to find the job that they are genuinely passionate about. If this tendency does not happen, these people could lack motivation in their workplace.
In conclusion, although I agree choosing a job early and maintaining it might bring job satisfaction, I also believe that this can be done well by making changes in people’s career regularly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'face'.
Suggestion: face
...ght be appropriate to those who tend to faces challenges to achieve their career goal...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'achieving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: achieving
...e to those who tend to faces challenges to achieve their career goals. Secondly, in fact t...
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Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...reer goals. Secondly, in fact there are a large number of people trying different jobs in order t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03470031546 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80432946536 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567823343849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7143360161 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339688067265 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117865514811 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705748492616 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224463326845 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00827161291953 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.