Since the beginning of human civilisation, it has typically been a popular leader or a politician whose words or actions has brought about significant changes in world history. Conversely, scientists have also made remarkable contributions benefitting mankind but their impact has commonly been known to be sidelined. This brings me to concur to the view that politicians indeed have a more acute effect on people than scientists.
Scientists are people of knowledge and education. Their lives remain immersed in their pool of research and studies. They have limited interactions with the general public. Consequently the society often remains unaware of their work and much of their achievements remain unsung about. We can take for example the telephone without which today life seems improbable. Most of the public will be aware of the telecom providers that their governments allow but will not be aware of Sir Alexander G. Bell who invented it in the first place. Even today there is no unified platform where scientists from all over could share their discoveries, inventions and achievements with the general public in a way that could help them gain popularity.
Politicians on the other hand, are people’s representatives. Every word they say and every action they undertake has a direct impact on people. Politicians have an upper hand in their public reach as they are freely backed by their party people, supporters, media and more importantly by the law enforcement bodies. All major treaties, wars, alliances, contracts among countries around the world, which influenced the course of world events were associated with decisions by world leaders and politicians.
Frankly, the analogy is not even a fair one. Although there is much power in knowledge, scientists are unable to affect the lives of the average joes of the world the way a speech or decision of a politician does.
- Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world Other people however believe that scientists have the greatest influence Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Health care should not be provided for free regardless of a person s income The health of a person is in their own hands and they should therefore be held accountable for that Do you agree with this opinion 84
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Suggestion: public
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, first, frankly, if, so, for example, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21967213115 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8760172826 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619672131148 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.6541532977 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6470588235 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173696607409 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587931671906 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667909083774 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106857312828 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504931835768 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.