Radio will no longer to hold its presence as Television and Internet media will replace it very soon. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Day by day technologies are improving and people search new ways of entertainment. Radio was one of the most popular ways of imparting edcation, information and entertainment. I don't think radio will totally disappear soon, though the importance may reduce.
As seeing is believing, the Internet and Television gained an pivotal position among the viewers. Breaking news and live telecasts revolutioned the visual medias. As it is a passive entertainment and relaxation, many people even addicted to it. However, to enjoy T.V or the Internet power is essential. Though Television become cheap, we ...
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Sentence: Breaking news and live telecasts revolutioned the visual medias.
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Sentence: The cost of these two devices are much higher, compaired to the radio.
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Sentence: It is cheap and the network is easily availble every where.
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Sentence: All these clearly evident that the importance of Radio is not completly deniable.
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Sentence: If the presentation is attactive, convenient and comfortable people will never give up listening Radio programmes.
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