Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is not deniable that sports players should be fit for their sports. Some people think that only physical strength is important for sports players, while others think that only mental strength is important. In my opinion, both mental and physical strength is equally important for sports players.
To begin with, for any sports, physical strength is very important. If the player playing is not physically fit, then that payer might not be able to perform that sport well. For example, in cricket, if the batsman is not fit, if the batsman is too heavy that he is not able to carry his own weight, then it will be difficult for him to run for the runs. If the player is physically fit but not mentally strong, then the game of that player will get affected. The player will not be able to concentrate on his game, which may result in losing the match.
On the other hand, mental strength is equally important for sports players. If the players are mentally absent during their game, then the performance of that player will not give the required result. For example, in cricket, if the batsman is mentally absent in the game, if he is not able to concentrate on his game, then he will not perform to his best level. The players should always keep their focus and should never leave their goals.
To put it in a nutshell, physical and mental strength both are important for the players playing sports. In my opinion, players cannot give their 100% if he is not mentally or physically fit. I think both the factors are equally necessary for a player.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, well, while, for example, i think, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61732851986 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31856658732 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.393501805054 0.561755894193 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6317310487 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335542139776 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152368345762 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155807457183 0.0667982634062 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268488045813 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173208270978 0.056905535591 304% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.01 8.58950901804 70% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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