Environmental issues are too difficult to be solved by individuals. An international effort is needed to protect the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We, the humans beings, one of the most intellectual breeds made by nature, have never served as its obedient pupils.Instead, we have always created one issue or another to the valuable setup arranged by God. It is high time now to understand that our alterations with environment have to be thwarted and we need to take some concerete measures in order to maintain harmony with Mother Nature.
Both, the natural catastrophes such as volcanic eruptions and tsunamis as well as human activities, have responsible for the existing detrimental shape of our environment. Governments, all around the world, have become conscious about waning conditions of our environment; they have started taking some strong steps in order to redeem our relationship with our environment. Governments have initiated many consolidated awareness programmes for people; what is more, programmes such as tree plantations and go green seminars etc have also been implemented. Irrespective of all the above mentioned endeavours, botching up of environment has not subside. Instead, it has reached to soaring height.The NGOs all around the world along with environment protection bodies, suggest that, these rectifications Are needed to be implemented through a ubiquitously acknowledge forum.For example dissent in many countries, including India, USA, UK, recently made for designing a global strategy to resolve the issue of global warming, which has started showing its positivity, as most of these countries have started considering the issue seriously. Thus it can be asserted that more such global efforts would yield prolific results.
It has to be understood by every individual that environmental issues are as bad a problem as any other Indigenous problem that one may have, the purview of this environmental issue is so high that, it needs a cumulative global ado to get resolved. Many of us already know the deteriorating conditions of our environment. We even try to proffer for our concern through various farmers, but these farmers have yet only been able to generate a trivial impact to resuscitate environment. It has to be understood that organisations like UNO, who have muscle and a voice to construct a global platform, should reshuffle their priority is to keep environmental concern at top.
To pen down, it is true that individuals in past have ignited many revolution, but those revolution, unlike the current predicament, where fought against of foe. Here, we need to fight our own comforts and heedlessness, an individual have rarely been able to overcome their own selfish setups. In order to achieve any noteworthy swivel to environmental issues, global and ever with collective collaterals is needed.A global forum should design some austere regulations even if some individual benefits are compromised.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, well, as to, for example, such as, as well as, it is true, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2376.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 440.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12136069079 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586363636364 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 759.6 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.4968567505 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.4 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157332491177 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554456790766 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364326661384 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982960799247 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279307873713 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.