Write a letter to your friend inviting him her to your family party In your letter Explain why you are organizing the party Describe what you are planning to do Say how important it is to have your friend at the party

Hi Jhon,
Hope you’re doing good, I am writing this letter to inviting you to join my family dinner party on coming week end at sdfdd hotel on the occasion of my sister birthday.
I am planning to celebrate her 15th birthday party as a memorable day because I want to surprise her by calling all cousins and friends, As you know for the reason of my father sick we unable to celebrate her birthday from last 2 years. Besides that ,this year every one fine and we all back to normal life want to have a family gathering on this occasion.
I planning to arrange a dinner party with live music concert from one of her favourite singer along with sdsd band. Even I am planning to have some fun games ,singing competition followed by cake cutting followed by dinner combined with drinks.
I am pleased to hear the news that you will join the party as you are a good brother for my sister as well. So she will be happy by seeing you in the party. She knows you from childhood and happy to play with you additionally she enjoy while you are singing , you are one of her favourite singer as well.
Even though you are busy with office work Please try to attend the party , let us have joyful party.

See you on the party
Best regards,
Mdfdf

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...irthday party as a memorable day because I want to surprise her by calling all co...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...lebrate her birthday from last 2 years. Besides that ,this year every one fine and we a...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...birthday from last 2 years. Besides that ,this year every one fine and we all back...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...e a family gathering on this occasion. I planning to arrange a dinner party with...
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Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ven I am planning to have some fun games ,singing competition followed by cake cut...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nks. I am pleased to hear the news that you will join the party as you are a go...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... pleased to hear the news that you will join the party as you are a good brother...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enjoys'.
Suggestion: enjoys
...happy to play with you additionally she enjoy while you are singing , you are one of ...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tionally she enjoy while you are singing , you are one of her favourite singer as ...
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Line 6, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...fice work Please try to attend the party , let us have joyful party. See you on...
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Line 8, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve joyful party. See you on the party Best regards, Mdfdf
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, well, while, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35193133047 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20018518501 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562231759657 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4742140834 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245950067743 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106191500176 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542007872601 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15548306797 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638023186149 0.0580467560999 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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