Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis and metro on vehicle-free days .To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
The profound effects of the government should develop public transportation services rather than building roads for vehicle owing population which generally affected a great deal of heated debate, have become more debatable. Some proponents maintain that mass transportation services help people to reduce daily expenses, whilst opponents with insightful arguments claim that going trend is harmless to our society. In this essay, I will elaborate that the expansion of public transportation is beneficial for the Nation’s growth.
At the outset, there is a myriad of reasons, why the sovereignty should address the problem, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that global warming is become the most serious problem in the world, and the the major reason behind this situation is everyone have their own vehicle therefore air pollution is rising. For instance, the Ministry of every country should increase the registration fees and put more toll tax.
On the other hand, public transport is the main cause of increasing carbon dioxide level in the air. therefore, the governing Body should encourage people to use public transportation on a daily basis to visit offices or homes. For instance, most of the countries have started Metro service at a very minimal cost.
In view of the remarkable arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the growing trend of public transportation is paramount for our community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41592920354 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84384906149 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632743362832 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2521436083 50.4703680194 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132863019947 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548138609478 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299738049055 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783706222552 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036615472471 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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