Many believes that adverts encourage people to buy things that are not really necessary, and others think that people have started to ignore them as they are everywhere. I believe, even though people try to avoid watching advertise, a majority of customers are pulled in anyway by the popularity of the product and the celebrity promoting them.
Advertisement have become a key aspect for a company to survive in todays tough competition. Companies have started investing more on the adverts, hoping to generate big revenue out of it. One of the reason behind it is, as most of these products are endorsed by celebrities, the young generation is more attracted towards the product and they end up buying it. For instance, Coca cola become the biggest company after few big celebrities started promoting it. So, by promoting a product with a popular face makes a way to easy selling of that product.
On the other hand, with the increase in frequency of these advertise, people have lost interest in watching them. Nowadays, we see adverts not only on television and newspaper, but also on phones, websites and on the roads. People walking on roads can see big hoardings of different items, mobile phones are buzzed every now and then with different promotional offers, and also people surfing the internet come across so many different advertising pop-ups, that most of the time people just ignore and scroll down. The way advertisements try to reach people have made it really difficult to ignore them completely.
In conclusion, celebrity endorsement really reaches to people and influence them to buy that particular product, this is seen especially with young people. So, even though people try not to pay attention towards the advertisements, the way they surround us makes its almost impossible to ignore them. And, it is up to the people to control the effect of such fancy advertise and save their time and money for things that are really needed.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: IN_ANYWAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in any way'?
Suggestion: in any way
...ise, a majority of customers are pulled in anyway by the popularity of the product and th...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...duct and the celebrity promoting them. Advertisement have become a key aspect f...
^^^
Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...fferent items, mobile phones are buzzed every now and then with different promotional offers, and ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advertising seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much different advertising', 'a good deal of different advertising'.
Suggestion: much different advertising; a good deal of different advertising
...ple surfing the internet come across so many different advertising pop-ups, that most of the time people j...
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Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ple surfing the internet come across so many different advertising pop-ups, that most of the t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, if, really, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00917431193 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69598880522 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535168195719 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8235329887 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20860168002 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745580040413 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545622402473 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139074276287 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558446351304 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: IN_ANYWAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in any way'?
Suggestion: in any way
...ise, a majority of customers are pulled in anyway by the popularity of the product and th...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...duct and the celebrity promoting them. Advertisement have become a key aspect f...
^^^
Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...fferent items, mobile phones are buzzed every now and then with different promotional offers, and ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advertising seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much different advertising', 'a good deal of different advertising'.
Suggestion: much different advertising; a good deal of different advertising
...ple surfing the internet come across so many different advertising pop-ups, that most of the time people j...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ple surfing the internet come across so many different advertising pop-ups, that most of the t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, if, really, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00917431193 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69598880522 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535168195719 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8235329887 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20860168002 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745580040413 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545622402473 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139074276287 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558446351304 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.