In the past most people worked for small businesses while more people now work for large businesses What are the advantages and disadvantages of people working for large businesses

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In the past, most people worked for small businesses, while more people now work for large businesses.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of people working for large businesses

In this day and age, people have a tendency to work for big companies and they always give it their best shot on a regular basis to gain competitive edge over the other candidates to get a position in those places. It it quite different from the past as they just used to attach yourself to small companies. There are some both merits and demerits indeed which bring back to people to work one of two those forms.

On the one hand, The most advantages when people have chance to practice in big enterprises is that they can enhance their working level and behaviour ability themselves since it gathers almost all gifted and intelligent people therein because they can be taught a lot of different lessons and trained necessary experiences from co-workers in their companies. Besides, Working in big business give employees better service as to sick leave, holiday entitlement, medical insurance and so on. Most importantly, people can earn lucrative income and salary incentives from boss in big companies deserving their effort in that job

Despite these aforementioned benefits, several drawbacks do exist. Obviously, It exert some pressures on people when doing in big enterprises. It is possible, for instance, people usually have to work against the clock to meet the deadlines due to large amount of workload which their companies request. In addition to that, this cause them to lack persistently sleep and undermine their health in physical and mental like they can catch emotional distress or the other diseases such as stomachache or headache. From that, their productive work will reduce significantly and they can be got sack out of companies at any time

In conclusion is whatever the job is, when people work in large corporations have also some considerable advantages to people but there are some still disadvantages which people have to face and overcome from the job they select.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: It
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Message: Did you mean 'exerts'?
Suggestion: exerts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, still, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07301587302 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73305494222 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.9110749592 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.8 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305299883936 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116420139664 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686191505136 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190854805122 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285865243086 0.056905535591 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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