Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impact of it on the environment and on people, who lost their jobs because of it.
Lately, in light of the proliferation of social medias, it is now prevalent that consumers start to familiarise themselves with various online shopping platforms. However this trend is widely believed to cast a spell on the environmental sustainability as well as unemployment rate.Personally, I am in the consummate accord with this view.
Once online shopping has ushered in an era of unprecedented convenience and time-saving, it is likely that conventional retailers and façade owners would face up with new challenge. In fact, this new method of sale has no inseparable relationship with attention-grabbing store on a crowded avenue. Technically, all people need to do is setting up pops-up advertisement and waiting for costumers to send requests. Therefore, there would be a sharp decline in real-estate demand and related services, imperiling livelihood of jobs. Shoppee, an online mall gaining popularity in recent years, with their non-authenticated policies which pavé the way for low-quality commodities to perpetuate into Vietnam market is one of the culprit of negative competence between cunning merchandises and reliable one.
In regard to environment, it is evident that sheer volume of purchasing goods has sprawled a throw-away society and incentivize consumerism life style leading to irreversible changes towards nature.Given latest deception technology, corporations fervently sway their costumer into incessantly spending a lump sum on useless gadgets, by posting fancy pictures attached to products. Those kinds of commodity indeed are single-use and not substantive at all since they are mass-produced with low integrity. As a result, recent centuries have witnessed the demise of thousands of species, and the pollution rates are on the increase.
In conclusion, I would contend this new method of shopping definitely has negative impact on the societal level, hence we should be mindful when taking it into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70989761092 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43282280132 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679180887372 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3691202468 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.090909091 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0944930407694 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296457934345 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307197730989 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519275038034 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241861341696 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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