The charts below show information on crime in the UK for 2002.
The line graph and pie chart elaborate the relation between age and crime and which type of crime occurred in the year 2002 in UK.
Can a parent from the very first line graph that, the crime ratio picked in youngsters, which for 70 to 80%. There is 0% crime rate in 0 to 8 years children. Crime ratio slightly increased at 8 to 12 years children.10% of crime done by teenagers’. The age group of 28 to 44 at 20 to 10% crime ratio. 8 to 9% of senior citizens involved in criminal activity.
Further more, by chat the pics that there was only 9% of public order criminal activities prevailed in UK. UK had highest ratio of violent crime, was 46%. Criminal who involved in drug and property crime activity, which 22% and 23% respectively.
To conclude, it can be seen from the chart of line graph that old age people and teenagers entailed in crime was least than other age groups, while at the same time crime prevailed in violence mode had high ratio.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the highest'.
Suggestion: had the highest
...criminal activities prevailed in UK. UK had highest ratio of violent crime, was 46%. Crimin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4406779661 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43953991044 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581920903955 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3372527147 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.13902439024 878% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237185956716 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994105484831 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680553042011 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160021034995 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653367855385 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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