which one is more important? the ability to adapt yourself to the changing conduction or circumstance or knowledge?
I, for one, am of the opinion that having the ability to adjust or adapt to changing conduction is more important, having knowledge due to the two reasons, on which I will elaborate in the following essay.
To begin with, having the ability to be fit to the circumstance, individuals are able to build a connection with more people, helping them to extend their social ability, so they can become more successful in their vacation. It is a clear crystal that those who try to adapt themselves to a new situation can learn more about miscellaneous walks of life, thereby making more friends. Having more friends, people can become more successful in their occupation due to the fact that they have ones that can relieve their pain and can share their ideas, helping them to have a better mental situation, so they are more likely to become successful. In this regard, my experience is a compelling example of this. As I said before, For my graduate study I compelled to change my university. When I become in my new university, I could adjust myself to the new environment quickly and make a connection with others. There, I become familiar with my friend, Shirin, who is a P.HD. student for no. She helped me in order to find out what courses are proper for me and have a better perspective on my new environment, so I could study more efficacious and become successful. Had I not adapt to a new environment, I could not be successful in my graduate even if I had good knowledge.
Moreover, when a person is able to adapt himself to a new environment, she experiences a less level of stress than others, making him more successful in their occupation. In this regard, those who are more flexible in their new circumstance, are less worry about changes, so they can concentrate on their work, helping them to become more successful. In this line of thought, my experience is a compelling example of this. After my graduation, I have to change my university and go to another city for pursuing my education. Although I have heard negative things about changing university, I tried to stay positive and don't be worry about this change. Therefore, when I attend the new university I tried to concentrate my courses expect being worry about a new circumstance, which leads me to take a great GPA and become successful. If I could not adapt to the new environment, I would not concentrate on my courses, and having a good background could not improve my situation.
to put a nutshell, I believe that not only does having the ability to adapt to changing equip people with extended social networks but also it helps them to be more relaxed, leading it to be more important than having knowledge in order to become successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2250.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70711297071 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84967342765 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416317991632 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.0 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6510738921 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.421052632 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1578947368 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78947368421 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19280956839 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064633419267 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824994314141 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18854984464 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101325480796 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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