online communication is becoming more popular than face-to-face commnunication is many countries. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
It is true that the proliferation of technology has changed some certain aspects of human life. While it is believed that firms are increasingly using virtual communication rather than real interaction. despite the negative aspects of this form of communication, I would argue that the advantage is far more significant.
On the one hand, there are undeniable drawbacks associated with the reliance on online communication of organizations. One reason is that, harnessing online meetings instead of physical ones of a company makes them being victimized by computer crimes. In fact, critical meetings could be invaded private, pivotal information and sold to company’ rivals, which directly has an adverse bearing on firm development. Another negative reason is that it can reshape staff’ social behaviors as virtual communication can eliminate their needs to interact with their colleagues in person. This is inclined to not only make them less sociable individuals but also cause diminished social skills, leading to an unrewarding social life and feelings of isolation.
On the other hand, I would believe that the aforementioned disadvantages are outweighed by the advantages of exploiting web-based communication. First, it is apparently convenient and cost-saving compared to face-to-face interaction. This means that companies are more unlikely to hire or construct an office for working purposes, employees are able to work at home without physical travels to workplace, which saves great deal of money which might be allocated for other campaigns such as advertising. Second, by harnessing virtual meetings, firms could recruit competent staffs around the world. Nas daily, for instance, has recruited almost 100 staffs living in foreign countries, which helps the company working effectively.
In conclusion, I assert that although there are certain drawbacks of using online communication, the advantages should be appreciated which directly make a company flourished.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: Despite
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, second, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73986486486 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1756163738 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618243243243 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4874393966 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.357142857 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136853694466 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480081100496 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051666770734 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774695120317 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236975708901 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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