You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school.
Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter:
• say what job you have applied for
• explain why you want this job
• suggest what information the teacher should include
Dear Mrs.Patricia,
I am Robin Johnson one of your senior student, graduated in 2010 from your class. I would like to request a document from your side such as a letter of reference, in order to submit it to the company that I am applying to.
As you know, I was searching for a job that matches with my major studies and I have found a position overseas as an Interior Designer that suites my knowledge and experience.
This job full-fill my duties and requirements, it also aids me in increasing my opportunities in this field. Addition to that our country is facing a disaster economic crisis. Therefore, I thirst for this job.
I would like from your side to deliver me this letter of reference soon, that includes my attendance, behavior, year of study, grades and my overall score. Also, if I can get 3 original signed copies.
Thank you for your help and I look forward for your reply.
Best Regards,
Your Student Robin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Patricia
Dear Mrs.Patricia, I am Robin Johnson one of your seni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70481927711 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70554368167 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632530120482 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6331542419 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320287586509 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112502835441 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892134467755 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167239559552 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692388019639 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.