Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Leadership and working of the political party in power in any country determines the country's present as well as near future. It is of utmost importance that a political party capable of improving all of its citizens lifestyle procures majority and assumes power. Citizens play the key role in electing a government and hence it is imperative that they need to be well informed. In my opinion, children below the age of 15 years should not be allowed to vote.
To start with, children below the age of 15 years are still in schools, learning about various subjects including history, geography, civics and political science. They don't have the complete knowledge and idea about the system of governments: democracy, communism and monarchy to name a few. I would like to support this with an incident that occured when I was in school. When my fellow classmate was asked about the type of government in North Korea, he confidently answered it to be a democratic country. Our teacher then took an extra class to teach us about various types of governments and their examples.
Moreover, children don't have the exposure to the government's working and in which areas does their nation want immeditate attention like poverty, agriculture, cross border relations etc. The children won't be able to understand the election manifestos of various parties and that the leadership skills of the party head plays a major role in the working of the political party in power. To illustrate, let's consider a nation that is having severe border disputes with other countries. Children might give their vote to a party supporting educational reforms rather than the one that wishes to ameliorate cross border situations strategically and thus prevent war.
Additionally, children below 15 years tend to get influenced by their parents, teachers and friends. They don't have any concrete opinions of their own and are susceptible to bribes, toys and electronic gadgets. A stellar example would be of my friend whose parents were a part of a political party. Even though he was galvanized by the working and manifestations of another party, he was forced to give his vote to the party his parents were a part of.
All in all, I disagree with the plan that children below 15 years of age should be allowed to vote. They should first have proper knowledge and opinions, which comes with age and experience, before they are allowed to vote.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, still, then, thus, well, as for, as well as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98275862069 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72540368246 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514778325123 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5999695771 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.473684211 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210915157833 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716820394736 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903768987604 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132482599927 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848432007663 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.