The plans below show the layout of a university’s sport Centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Overall, it is clear that although some facilities such as swimming pool, reception and seating will be remained still, outdoors courts will be transformed to new various services. Moreover, some amenities such as gym and changing rooms will be expanded form their measures, too.
Nowadays, sports Centre has one area in the middle of it that has enter door on the south and ends up to a reception area. This region includes a 25 meter swimming pool at the center that has access to a changing room on its left hand. In the north of the map, a gym is located and east portion is allocated to seating. Outside of this region, on both east and west side of the whole map, there are outdoor courts available.
According to the improvement’s plan, the west outdoor courts will change to involve a leisure pool at the top of it and a changing room at the bottom with access to a small sports shop on its right. Amenities in the center of region will be the same except of gym which is decided to expand its size to the east. In the east of the plan, a café and a changing room will be added to the south as well as 2 separate dance studios to the east. Next to the seating, there will be sports hall which will be constructed in the middle of current east outdoor courts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'entered'.
Suggestion: entered
...s one area in the middle of it that has enter door on the south and ends up to a rece...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, still, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37552742616 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37420427661 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489451476793 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5797628679 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.7 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112422762637 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484420506357 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373107239266 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754363639115 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365807370426 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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