A few languages are increasingly spoken in different countries, while the use of other is rapidly declining
It is a positive or negative development
These days, there is a tendency that a small number of languages have prevailed in the world, while many others are being less spoken. In my opinion, this trend could bring both positive and negative consequences.
On the societal level, there are substantial benefits when many countries share common languages. The primary virtue is that it facilitates cross-cultural communication, which boosts international trade and cultural exchange. In retrospect, people used to be neglected to trade outside their countries’ borders due to the fact that it is utterly difficult to comprehend people who speak a different language. Whereas nowadays, ones who are bilingual or polyglot find it easier to do business or work because their issues and demands at work can be addressed and discussed thoroughly. More interestingly, it provides an equal opportunity for people from less developed countries to compete with those from the developed ones. To be more specific, by acquiring languages that are frequently used in business, science or technology, they can accelerate their study and work. For example, India has made a leap in every aspect, from the economy to the technology, partly by using English as their official language.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned merits,the fact that other languages are becoming less popular can bring several downsides. In the first place is that communities would lose parts of their venerable traditions such as songs, myths and poetry which are not easily translated into another language. This may have an adverse bearing on their cultural identity, leading to a weakened social cohesion as their values and practices have been replaced by new ones.
Moreover, this trend affects not only the local culture but human civilization as a whole.If all country commences using the same language, it will gradually destroy the cultural diversity of the world.
In summary, albeit i believe the trend is inevitable in the era of globalization, people need to have measures to protect and preserve their less spoken language as a way to maintain their cultural identity
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
These days, there is a tendency that a small number of languages have prevailed in the world, ...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...otwithstanding the aforementioned merits,the fact that other languages are becoming ...
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Line 4, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...lture but human civilization as a whole.If all country commences using the same la...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rsity of the world. In summary, albeit i believe the trend is inevitable in the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, in summary, such as, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37160120846 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95710673529 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616314199396 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5878476163 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171309279295 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565015317706 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459104740432 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922894138102 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05754467041 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.