Planning international holiday is quiet renowned across the globe. However, it is often argued that in coming years people will plan a holiday in their home country rather than foreign country. I believe, as the expense of international travel is quiet high and also, nowadays government helps in promoting national tourism in a country, so may be in future people might get attracted towards the beauty of ones own country and plan budgeted holidays accordingly.
Travel industry is the most blooming industry in the world. People often plan to travel to different destination during their holidays. With easy access to the flight tickets and its low cost, people trend to book international holidays, as they can get the opportunity to know the cultures and lifestyle of different country. So, international tourism has become famous worldwide. In India majority of people plan to go to international destination during their long break. However, one problem occurs with currency exchange rate, people coming from countries with low exchange rate have to spend huge amount during their travel. As these rates are fluctuating and most of the time increasing, it might reduce the number of traveler to that particular country.
Apart form that, a lot of unexplored part of a country are being explored by the people of the country. Also, government is taking interest to develop such undiscovered places and help it to become a tourist destination.
For instance, government have started advertisements showing unexplored places in India, like Arunachal Pradesh, Kutch and many more. So spreading awareness of the natural beauty in ones own country may increase local tourism in future. And also the cost of the holiday will be half when spent in their own country.
In conclusion, even though international tourism is attractive, as one can know the culture of another country, the currency exchange rate may stop tourist to explore another country as it increases the budget of the traveller. Also, natural beauty of unexplored spots in home country may attract nationals to plan their pocket friendly trip efficiently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Apart from
...traveler to that particular country. Apart form that, a lot of unexplored part of a cou...
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...elp it to become a tourist destination. For instance, government have started ad...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... own country may increase local tourism in future. And also the cost of the holiday will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27058823529 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81179547116 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520588235294 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4415906132 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.411764706 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243464012512 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826190617046 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06622570795 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134127929724 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768990395067 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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