Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social networking sites Other people prefer not to create such records Which approach do you prefer and why | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social networking sites Other people prefer not to create such records Which approach do you prefer and why

In this era of accelerated technological progress, the interest of posting various photos or videos has increased. Some people argue that this will definitely lead to bad consequences. In their opinion it is quite inappropriate to post content like this. Others, however, think that there is nothing wrong with this activity. They insist that one can post anything he or she wants, because it is his or her right. Taking into account all the pros and cons of the given claim, I am inclined to think that, although everyone has rights to do anything they want, nevertheless they should be attentive to what they post. My viewpoint is informed by the considerations, which paragraphs below will spell out in greater detail.
Preliminary, it goes without saying that, in spite of the fact that social networks perserve that they provide high ranked protection, one cannot be sure for hundred percent about his or her safe online "life". Today social networks are so well-developed that everyone has access to the information. But not everyone has good or neutral thoughts. A vivid illustration of my words can be the instance of my town. A group of students went camping and they were posting everything that they were doing: photos with marked locations, various videos and so on. At first sight there is nothing wrong with it, however these posts saw a dangerous robber. Police had tried to catch him, yet he was a good hider. The robber followed the students and when they reached a deserted place, he attacked. Fortunately they were not alone- an adult couple was strolling around and they noticed the robber. The couple immediately called the police and the robber was caught. If the couple was not there, everything would not be so colorful. Nevertheless, if the students had not posted photos and videos with so many details, I do not think that something like this even would have happened.
To reveal yet another aspect of my stance, social network sites are not always used for people's convenience and entertainment. There are a myriad of forbidden content in various social accessible and banned networks, and we are not aware about the existence of these networks. These networks can easily use one's photos in their sites, if he or she will not be attentive. Posting everything can lead to consequences like this, if one trusts all the social networks. A proof of my words can be the example of my friend. My friend Ann was on vacation in Maldives, so she was posting a lot of photos at the beach with different beautiful swimsuits. I suggested her not to post so many photos and videos, because I knew that there are a plethora of "pirates, who break and use girls' photos. Ann did not listen to me and continued to post what she wanted. I tried twice again, but nothing changed. A week later, another friend of mine sent me a screen shot, where I saw that in a prohibited site were posted Ann's photos. Without hesitation I sent the screen shot to Ann, reported the site and required them to delete Ann's photos. We solve this problem rapidly, however there are hundreds of girls' from all over the globe, who face this kind of issue and can do nothing for their protection.
In the long run, the spectrum of opinions people may entertain whether posting lots of photos or videos is safe or not, can be extremely wide. Taking into account such factors as self-safeguard and bypass of "scandals'', I insist that avoiding the creature of such contents will be the best option for everyone.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...nked protection, one cannot be sure for hundred percent about his or her safe online &a...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...venience and entertainment. There are a myriad of forbidden content in various social ...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...networks. These networks can easily use ones photos in their sites, if he or she wil...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... post so many photos and videos, because I knew that there are a plethora of &apo...
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...s will be the best option for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, kind of, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2912.0 1977.66487455 147% => OK
No of words: 606.0 407.700716846 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80528052805 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96155895361 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70429373179 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 298.0 212.727598566 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491749174917 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 897.3 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2081436307 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2424242424 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.24242424242 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0838452140109 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232316457949 0.076458572812 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307672415169 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0567246645887 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157093126758 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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