Your friend is planning to go on a business trip to a city you know well. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
– tell him/her about some attractions to go sightseeing
– recommend a restaurant to eat
– give some advice on transportation
Dear Chinmay,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of health. I've just received your letter, and I'm very thrilled to hear that you are planning to go at Ahmedabad for a company work. I am writing this letter to advice you about few tourist places, famous restaurants and transportation at Ahmedabad as I lived there for 3 years to pursue post graduation degree.
Ahmedabad has rich historical background. you would enjoy your visit to the Gandhi Ashram which is located at Wadaj. Here you will be able to gain significant knowledge about an independence fight of India and the great freedom fighter Mahatma Gandhi. What is more, a tour to Ahmedabad is incomplete without visiting the Lal darwaja street market where you can find myriad traditional and fashionable clothes.
In addition, there are numerous restaurants with good quality food, but I strongly recommended you to take dinner at the Vishala restaurant which is located at vasana. It is well-known food place for traditional food of Gujarat and you will be mesmerized with their extra-ordinary interior and delicious dishes.
Although there are enough public transportation services available, there are lots of complaints received regarding safety in buses in Ahmedabad. As you will be travelling first time to Ahmedabad, I advice you to prefer private cars as they are more comfortable and the safest mode of transportation.
Hope this information would help you for better planning, and if you need any further assistance, don't hesitate to call me any time.
Best regards,
Nirav
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, regarding, well, in addition, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18972332016 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91519594832 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5542458792 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182063214936 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613873284342 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569950203653 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937734156607 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750521258809 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.