Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.
To What extent do you agree or disagree?
Film industry has great influence on the society. Youngsters having bad influence these days because instead of following the accomplishments, they are attracted more towards the glamour and rich lifestyle of famous peoples. I strongly agree, that appreciating actors for their looks and lifestyle rather than their work, really having a negative impact on the teenagers.
To begin with, Due to excessive coverage of personal life of movie stars, kids are more attracted towards their living standards and looks. Instead of following their good work, they are keen to know about their glamorous side. Therefore, good actors usually are not as commercially successful as the stars that focus on their looks and physique. To recite an example, in past few years critically acclaimed movies are not as successful on box-office as movies from big stars.
Furthermore, some people are so attached to their favorite stars that they even started to worship them. To look cool, even many young people are now started using drugs. Number of gyms are flooded with college going crowd who starve their body to get that six pack abs. Despite knowing ill effects, they are channelising their energy in wrong direction. A recent study published in a leading magazine, illustrate that 30 percent of youngsters are involved into drugs due to following the lifestyle of celebrities. Teenagers have very badly influenced by the fake lifestyles portraying by social media influencers. To conclude, I would say more awareness is required to channel the young energy in right direction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are usually
... glamorous side. Therefore, good actors usually are not as commercially successful as the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, really, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27888446215 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73722866331 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637450199203 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2833332507 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209222919573 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644805092455 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525282809057 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140862437839 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395340720492 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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