You are not satisfied with the changing rooms in a sport center that you visit.
Write a letter to the sport manager. In your letter:
- Explain the problem
- Say how you feel about this problem
- And say what steps you would like the manager to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the changing room of My Fitness center that you are managing.
Last night, I visited your gym center for a work-out session after a long working day. I expected a good time there as it is an expensive and famous sports complex center, but what I got was a total disappointment for your facilities, especially the male changing room. It is in a bad state as the water is leaking all over the place, there is garbage on the floor without any attention, one of the toilets can’t even be flushed.
The unacceptable and sub-standard of the male changing room leaves me very furious at the time that I couldn’t finish my work-out. I suggest your management team to look into this issue as soon as possible and correct it as it is effecting your customer experience with your services. Furthermore, I demand a total refund for the entry ticket I paid yesterday, I feel the price is not justified with the service your center is providing.
Please take this complaint seriously and act accordingly.
Yours faithfully,
Kevin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, if, look, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78645833333 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87053831787 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0631699721 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.111111111 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241464314349 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816363869062 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652184716566 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136541919914 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769557744479 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.