Many people are of the opinion that people should keep their things in an organized way at one place be it at home or at their job. I believe that, maintaining tidiness is a key to success, when things are organized neatly it brings in positivity and saves a lot of time and energy that is otherwise utilized in searching of that particular thing. However, not all things needs to be placed back to where they belong, some times it is ok to keep stuff at your reach when they are used regularly.
It is widely known that, when your surroundings are neat and clean, it gives a feel of a mental peace. So, it is rally important to stay organized and have a habit of putting things in a right place. At work place people tend to maintain cleanliness as they know they are being judged. Also, at home documents like financial or health related papers if not kept properly, it gets difficult to find them at the time of emergency which may cost a life. When things are messy around the house it make a person feel distracted and makes them less productive.
On the other hand, for few things that are used routinely, it does not seem sensible to place it back. For instance, a book taken out from the shelf, need not to be returned back to the shelf after reading for a day. It is ok to keep it on a bed side or in the bed as the person is going to read it at any time of the day at their convenience.
In conclusion, staying organized really helps a person during the time of emergency, when some important documents are to be produced. Also, cleanliness makes a person to feel good and energetic. However, not everything shall be kept organized, sometimes its fair to keep things at your reach which are used daily at your convenience.
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced 56
- The first car appeared on British roads in 1888 By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use To what e 84
- Some people think it s better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them Other people believe it s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask for your help in finding a job in your country you have heard about a job in local company that might be suitable for him her tell you friend about a job and what sort of work it involves 78
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...en things are messy around the house it make a person feel distracted and makes them...
^^^^
Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
...book taken out from the shelf, need not to be returned back to the shelf after readin...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...aken out from the shelf, need not to be returned back to the shelf after reading for a day. I...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, really, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39318885449 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47967323296 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504643962848 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5097135523 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.357142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196774980214 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685441262602 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558951805522 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126515154137 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595074988461 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...en things are messy around the house it make a person feel distracted and makes them...
^^^^
Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
...book taken out from the shelf, need not to be returned back to the shelf after readin...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...aken out from the shelf, need not to be returned back to the shelf after reading for a day. I...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, really, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39318885449 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47967323296 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504643962848 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5097135523 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.357142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196774980214 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685441262602 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558951805522 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126515154137 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595074988461 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.