Exams, evaluation and assessment are words much associated with school and college life. However, there is disliking trend growing amongst students of this entire process. Personally, I believe any feedback regarding our performance must be welcomed and embraced. In this essay, I will discuss various reasons people quote for such aversion to the system and try to assert meticulous solution for the problem.
Generally, because of prejudice nature, pupils develop strong disownment towards test and results. Main cause for this attitude is, society has judgemental look on those who receive negative remarks. In contrast, people who receive positive report will be applauded and garnered with all merits. Exactly this differential treatment, what makes students to avoid criticism. Similarly, job prospects and future education is also much linked to the comments of evaluator. On the other hand, most of the employers, offer respected positions to those who has secured highest marks and let the other to procure menial jobs . Nevertheless, the role of analysis and rating, very important to understand our career projector. Without appraisals, whether primary or university education, we will be blind about our lacunas and weakness. For an instance, in an observation conducted under guidelines of Ministry of education, over selected schools reveals that sufficient progress is absent in students till the age of 6-8 since there are no formal exams. Whereas, once after kids attending exams at regular intervals significant skills improved in short period of time.
In order to bring change, from students point of view, there should be transparency in the whole exercise. In addition, parents and teachers need to have care-free approach on students when it comes to final results. Apart there is strict confidentiality to be managed by institutions and lecturers about their students performance. In this way, we can relax social pressure on the kids who had no outstanding points. Alongwith, awareness and proper methodology to make good use of report card to be created so that everyone can readily accept feedback. Instead of announcing on open platform, results can be delivered to individual addresses. Infact, one such example is ,In India suicide attempts reduced when Central Board Exams decided to stop using newspaper to publish result, instead opted internet where only individuals can view them personally.
From above discussions it is clear that anxiety is main cause for avoiding feedback. This being the case, we should tackle the situation only by alerting them to benefits of evaluation. Therefore, we need to have smooth transition for making them to accept the change.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...school and college life. However, there is disliking trend growing amongst students of this ...
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Line 5, column 555, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'secured the highest'.
Suggestion: secured the highest
...er respected positions to those who has secured highest marks and let the other to procure meni...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 617, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...and let the other to procure menial jobs . Nevertheless, the role of analysis and ...
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Line 5, column 1145, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ls significant skills improved in short period of time. In order to bring change, from ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 672, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...l addresses. Infact, one such example is ,In India suicide attempts reduced when ...
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Line 9, column 707, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le is ,In India suicide attempts reduced when Central Board Exams decided to stop...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, in contrast, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2297.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46904761905 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80352663044 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659523809524 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1507021217 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7083333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200479648526 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489805397065 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396916195437 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121452721427 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473657614765 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 155.0 78.4519038076 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...school and college life. However, there is disliking trend growing amongst students of this ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 555, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'secured the highest'.
Suggestion: secured the highest
...er respected positions to those who has secured highest marks and let the other to procure meni...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 617, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...and let the other to procure menial jobs . Nevertheless, the role of analysis and ...
^^
Line 5, column 1145, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ls significant skills improved in short period of time. In order to bring change, from ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 672, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...l addresses. Infact, one such example is ,In India suicide attempts reduced when ...
^^
Line 9, column 707, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le is ,In India suicide attempts reduced when Central Board Exams decided to stop...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, in contrast, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2297.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46904761905 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80352663044 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659523809524 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1507021217 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7083333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200479648526 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489805397065 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396916195437 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121452721427 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473657614765 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 155.0 78.4519038076 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.