Facebook is spying on us
In today’s hyper-connected world, Facebook is more and more popular and convenient, especially for young people. People use it to send a message to friends, share their picture and status, meeting new people, and engage to discuss their work,…
Every click, share, or comment you make, is all recorded by the tech giant, Facebook? It doesn't matter if this information is only accessible to online merchants and gives you more options for the products you are interested in. Which is helpful for you, annoying sometimes but not by much.
But the consequences are more serious when your personal information is leaked into the wrong hands. They know where you are, what you are doing, and what you need, ... at this moment you will not know what's dangerous ahead of you. In connection with the most recent leak of customer information, the founder of Facebook, Mark Zuckerberg has admitted to selling this largest social media user information to an organization specializing in analyzing behavior in the US and it was the organization that supported President Trump's campaign in 2016. Thanks to his understanding of the goal, he succeeded in convincing voters to vote for him and eventually won first with candidate Hillary.
In short, Facebook has invaded customer privacy, which entails many potential risks for future users. However, this problem can be avoided by raising awareness among Facebook users and the attitude to avoid when surfing Facebook.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...people, and engage to discuss their work,… Every click, share, or comment you mak...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ecorded by the tech giant, Facebook? It doesnt matter if this information is only acce...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1906779661 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75980978589 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686440677966 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1984180592 43.030603864 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.363636364 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135526322568 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461035126599 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550367353518 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083546008586 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493378174641 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 40.7170731707 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.