Dear Mr. Patel
I am writing this letter to inform you about my interest to work in our company's head office in Australia for a span of about 6 months.
I would like to join head office as because it will allow me to take part in global marketing training session. I had heard that it will be commencing from 1st December, 2020 and will continue for 6 months. This session proves to be a great opportunity for me to learn marketing skills, which will help me to promote our upcoming products at home town.
Furthermore, I had talked to Ms. Lilly and she has agreed to look after some of my responsibilities on behalf of me. Remaining work will be handled by me through mail and on call availability whenever needed.
Finally, I request you to represent my point in front of senior fro approval. If possible, please suggest me proper accommodation over there as I am new to the nation.
Thank you for your correspondence. I look forward for your positive reply.
Yours faithfully,
Nir
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t in global marketing training session. I had heard that it will be commencing fr...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'December 2020'.
Suggestion: December 2020
...ard that it will be commencing from 1st December, 2020 and will continue for 6 months. This se...
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Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to market'.
Suggestion: to market
... be a great opportunity for me to learn marketing skills, which will help me to promote o...
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Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
...o represent my point in front of senior fro approval. If possible, please suggest m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67231638418 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81454614782 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1495960636 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1818181818 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239834431006 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095445150605 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886037687211 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135074481073 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108343054729 0.0580467560999 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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