This is a fact that technology is being developed day by day due to new inventions. While I support the argument that nowadays people use online media for reading books and newspapers, I also agree that people will buy published reading material.
On the one hand, according to me there are several reasons of using less printed books and newspaper. Firstly, in these days youngsters browse internet more as compared to old age people at present because they have huge knowledge about using technology. Moreover, old people have been using the printed newspapers and books for a long time and they are habitual of reading publishers papers in the morning with a cub if tea. That is why, they can not stop reading printed newspapers and this is quite difficult for them to turn towards using online media. Secondly, some people love to read books because they do not know how to operate apps online so they have only single option of reading printed books. Finally, people could access online books only if they have internet connection sometimes there might be network issues which hinders the people to read online. However, reading published books and newspapers does not have connection with internet or electricity. Most importantly, printed media is not only meet the needs of people of all ages but also a cheaper than online media.
On the other hand, I also agree that online media is growing with passage of time and numerous factors are contributing in this trend. First of all, in today’s materialistic world every has access to the internet such as on cell phones , on personal computers via wifi as well as on smart TVs people. Browse internet so it has become easy for them to read books and newspapers online . Therefore, people use more serve more on the internet now. Besides this, people can search about anything on the internet as this is too wide like on Wikipedia and encyclopedia people can read every book or news. Apart from this, there are many social sites available online which can be accessed by public for taking daily updates. For example, YouTube and Facebook are two famous social sites used by the people . What is more, people can subscribe the channels for taking every day news as well as people could create channel for earning money via YouTube. So that people prefer online sites more, especially, young generation. Last but not least, reading online is more interesting than reading offline and people do not need to pay extra for this.
To conclude, although I believe that online media is wide and used by people at large level for reading news and books yet I agree that printed books and newspapers has their own important and useful for those who can not operate online media.
- Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companies Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 84
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports Why is it Is it a positive or negative development 84
- Some people say that e books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magzines to what extent do you agree or disagree 41
- In future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 67
- Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by other of the same age This is called peer pressure Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the disadvantages 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, such as, as well as, first of all, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2265.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 467.0 315.596192385 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85010706638 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38210565313 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48608137045 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.9 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0477538692 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2380952381 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7619047619 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233327638224 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842053650431 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657763331179 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159896910339 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579535196882 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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