some people think that university degree is essential for getting good job but other thinks that work experience more important to what extend do you agree or not
For good employment position education and experience, both are equally important. According to some people the only way to get a good position in an organization with, University degree is a gateway but others think that vocational training after school education is more necessary. It is undoubtedly, that for higher-level jobs higher education is compulsory I strongly disagree with the second point of view. In this essay, we are going to discuss some of the competitive edges which properly qualified person have on the non-degree holder.
Firstly, university graduates have more confidence than others. they have the courage to speak in public and have read a lot about the theoretical work and experiences of other people. The person can use his knowledge and cognition to create something new. Without knowing others' work and their pitfall starting anything takes more time and energy than required. For example, In the management sector, it's important to understand dealing with people and something innovative which attract individuals.
Secondly, a mostly higher position occupied by degree holders. The person with more skills under work by these degree holders. For instance, a person would never get a job as a salesman, if he would not have a degree despite having experience in sales. A degree is an official and authentic grantee of work along with the experience that doubled its value.
On the other hand, people who believe that experience is more important have their own logic according to the current job scenario. Most of the graduates did not get employment after getting a degree to have not any specific work-related experience. with experience, they can start up their own business but of course, not all ended up with business. Most people worked as daily wages.
In conclusion, Each and everyone has their own perspective according to their experience some think University education is mandatory for higher posts while other argue that work experience after school education is more important. I strongly agree with the first point of view degree is also necessary or essential with experience to get better employment opportunities because it teaches other skills with professional education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29661016949 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82763846287 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522598870056 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8987340171 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6842105263 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6315789474 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357322644173 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105062900989 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687577381047 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206344857826 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432520791014 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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