Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after them.
What are the problems related to this? What are some possible solutions?
Nowadays, a large number of people who have a sincere concern about senior people, in fact, are too busy to take proper care of them. In this essay, I will consider what kind of issues it is caused and which way they can be tackled.
First, the most important consequences of negligence on the young adult’s part and lack of high-quality help to the elderly, are physical and mental problems of the senior generation associated with it. To illustrate, after a certain age an old person, especially a person with disabilities or severe health issues, is not able to provide themselves with a decent level of life. Sometimes even basic needs such as food supply, house maintenance, communication with the family or neighbours, etc. are not satisfied. As a result, seniors have become socially isolated and struggle to survive, which is leading to mental crises of them and problems with health.
The key to solving these issues is to establish a social service by the government that will provide the elderly with all necessary help such as health check-ups, medicine, and food packages. In addition, in order to improve the quality of social interactions of seniors, it would be a great solution to create free membership social clubs, where every pensioner could come and take lessons of dancing, singing or other creative activities. For example, my mother attended yoga classes in this kind of club in our city and I personally noticed that she has become more cheerful and interested in life.
In conclusion, the main problem arising from lack of time for helping the elderly is that the quality of life of the older generation is decreasing; as a rule, senior people suffer from isolation and inability to maintain a decent level of life. One of the possible ways to resolve the situation is the establishment by the authorities a social service that would take care of the elderly and provide them with all mandatory help.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
Nowadays, a large number of people who have a sincere concern about...
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Line 3, column 660, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rises of them and problems with health. The key to solving these issues is to es...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93577981651 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73568211679 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577981651376 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6623309287 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174432426881 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559461192051 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463004262578 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109094087501 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565943054876 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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