The graph below shows predictions about the number of people who will study tree major woelderly languages between 2020 and 2030

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The graph below shows predictions about the number of people who will study tree major woelderly languages between 2020 and 2030.

The line graph highlights divinations about how many learners will learn three different main languages of the entire world in millions, namely English, Spanish and Mandarin, over a decade from 2020 till 2030.
Generally, what stands out from the graph is that there will be upward trends in the number of learners of all languages. However, students who will learn Mandarin will start with the lowest result, it will be the second world language after English. The language of English will start with the second position, yet it will take the lowest rate at the end of the period.
Let's start by looking at the details, it is estimated that the number of English learners will reach aproximately to 550 millions and there will be a steady rise to 700 millions at 2024. After that, it will go down and recover between over 600 and 700 millions in turn, it will the highest rate at under 750 millions of students.
The number of students who learn Spanish and Mandarin are likely to rise over the entire period. When Mandarin will have reached to 100 millions by 2020, Spanish will be learned by just over 200 millions of the languages will be popular at the same rate (300 millions), after which it is believed that they will change their positions, and Spanish wil become the third most learned language after Mandarin, with over 500 and about 600 millions of students respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...turn, it will the highest rate at under 750 millions of students. The number of students who l...
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...0, Spanish will be learned by just over 200 millions of the languages will be popular at the sa...
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...after Mandarin, with over 500 and about 600 millions of students respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 1.00243902439 1496% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77083333333 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34120324596 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483333333333 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.7555700542 43.030603864 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.125 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207905623939 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110467618005 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312447602095 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142875248532 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309084608755 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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