It is irrefutable that family's support is incredible to make the person's life successful. However, it is be living by certain section of society that person can only achieve victory if they follow the route made by their parents . I strongly condemn this notion and discussed my view point in upcoming paragraphs to justify my opinion.
To commence with , parent's pressure on their offsprings prove desperate for their career and leads to ruined their entire life . To put it simply , interested stimulated people always do better in their life . since one may not feel happy and opted the particular field because he was pushing by someone can never be excel in that kind of course. Beside this , happiness is the another major factor that prove thos notion unacceptable . joy and satisfaction cannot brings from the things to which person have to do forcefully. For instance, one medical survey demonstrated that 80percent person who become a victim of depression and anxiety eventhough, they have a grand career . therefore , person ought tp give priority to their interest and contentment .
Another main thing which parents need to be considered before to make their children to follow their instructions is that it may affect their relation with them in a long term . mostly children accept the decision which is taken by elders , however if it is not prove worth for the future they always feel regret and put blame on their parents . for instance numbers of marriage are not successful in mostly developing nations, reason behind this is person have to do it unintentionally . hence , blame ultimately come on family which leads tp distort their loving relation .
To concluded, parents have life experience and always want to make the children's future bright . they considered their happiness and curiosity as first priority before compelling them to take their resolution
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports Why is it Is it a positive or negative development
- Some people say that a person s success is as a result of the way he has been brought up by his parents Do you agree or disagree 78
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports Why is it Is it a positive or negative development 40
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports Why is it Is it a positive or negative development 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...milys support is incredible to make the persons life successful. However, it is be livi...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...persons life successful. However, it is be living by certain section of society th...
^^
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y follow the route made by their parents . I strongly condemn this notion and disc...
^^
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...justify my opinion. To commence with , parents pressure on their offsprings pr...
^^
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...er and leads to ruined their entire life . To put it simply , interested stimulate...
^^
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ned their entire life . To put it simply , interested stimulated people always do ...
^^
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ed people always do better in their life . since one may not feel happy and opted ...
^^
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...people always do better in their life . since one may not feel happy and opted the pa...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'be' and 'excel'.
Suggestion: be never excel
...d because he was pushing by someone can never be excel in that kind of course. Beside this , h...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...xcel in that kind of course. Beside this , happiness is the another major factor t...
^^
Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ctor that prove thos notion unacceptable . joy and satisfaction cannot brings from...
^^
Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Joy
...r that prove thos notion unacceptable . joy and satisfaction cannot brings from the...
^^^
Line 3, column 678, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ety eventhough, they have a grand career . therefore , person ought tp give priori...
^^
Line 3, column 681, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... eventhough, they have a grand career . therefore , person ought tp give priority to thei...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 690, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gh, they have a grand career . therefore , person ought tp give priority to their ...
^^
Line 3, column 756, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...iority to their interest and contentment . Another main thing which parents ne...
^^
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... their relation with them in a long term . mostly children accept the decision whi...
^^
Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Mostly
...eir relation with them in a long term . mostly children accept the decision which is t...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...pt the decision which is taken by elders , however if it is not prove worth for th...
^^
Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'proved', 'proven'.
Suggestion: proved; proven
... taken by elders , however if it is not prove worth for the future they always feel r...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...el regret and put blame on their parents . for instance numbers of marriage are no...
^^
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...regret and put blame on their parents . for instance numbers of marriage are not su...
^^^
Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... is person have to do it unintentionally . hence , blame ultimately come on family...
^^
Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
... person have to do it unintentionally . hence , blame ultimately come on family which...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...on have to do it unintentionally . hence , blame ultimately come on family which l...
^^
Line 5, column 574, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...h leads tp distort their loving relation . To concluded, parents have life exp...
^^
Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce and always want to make the childrens future bright . they considered their ha...
^^
Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ant to make the childrens future bright . they considered their happiness and cur...
^^
Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... to make the childrens future bright . they considered their happiness and curiosit...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16447368421 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71612146741 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569078947368 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4682379551 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978601948622 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372589817826 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310630014337 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.060602203524 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244144826143 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.