Today, the advancements of technology have contributed to shortening the distance between people no matter where they are. Therefore, it is said that humans easily connect with others, thanks to the presence of the Internet. I utterly agree with the mentioned-above idea, and this essay shall examine the reasons why I support this.
First and foremost, members of a family or any group have opportunities to keep in touch with others through Internet services. In the past, to notify relatives about their status or information, it took them weeks even months before a hand-writing letter arrived at the destination. In contrast, if individuals have cellphones, laptops or tablets equipped with 3G or 4G, they can interact with others only in the speed of light. Besides, they can use applications to make a video call which helps to see each other during the calling.
Moreover, the Internet is also beneficial to all aspects of the economy, ranging from Agriculture to Industry. In detail, with the rise of online shopping, people find it easy to search the origin and the quality of needed items by asking the seller or by the other consumers' reviews, even the stores are very far from their location. Furthermore, conferences or contracts are performed via Skyper or Zoom. Take the Covid-19 pandemic as a paradigm, a plethora of authorities and CEOs have taken advantages of this method to organize their meetings.
In conclusion, it is no doubt that due to the Internet enhancement, geographical barriers are more unlikely an anxious issue between from different communities. Although anything has their demerits and merits, the benefits, which have been offered by the Internet, are not undeniable. It is highly recommended that humans should realize its harmful effects to reduce and create better lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1768707483 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88014710573 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649659863946 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9007338675 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.714285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14353791185 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429119452162 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301809756303 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806177537451 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218519268481 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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