Risk Taking
The Topic is about risk taking, whether it is worth taking it or not.
The writer takes the position that risk takers endanger themselves, without a benefit or a reward. By contrast, the lecturer argues that it is important sometimes to take risks, and we should tolerate it as it can have some benefits or reward.
The lecturer cast doubt on the writer’s position on considering risk taking as a suicidal act, For instance, she makes the key point that the risk taker is aware of the danger of his act, but his aptitude is positive, thinking that he will succeed in his action.
According to the writer, however, he thinks that risk taking is illogical and pathological.
In another instance, the lecturer argues that the writer is wrong to believe that risk taking has no benefits. She gives evidence of her position by showing us that it has physical and chemical reward as it boost our blood steam, giving us pleasure ,Furthermore its boost our confident and self-esteem .In this regard, the writer takes a more different position by arguing that the purpose of people who engage in such dangerous activities, is to hide their failure, for instance he mention the students whose grade are not good, and he tries to cover it by taking needless chances
To sum up, the writer and lecturer are mostly in disagreement on the issue of taking risk, The author believes it is useless to take unnecessary risk, while the lecturer thinks that sometimes it necessary to take it as it have some benefits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to take risks, and we should tolerate it as it can have some benefits or reward. ...
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Line 9, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ition by showing us that it has physical and chemical reward as it boost our bloo...
^^
Line 9, column 250, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...oost our blood steam, giving us pleasure ,Furthermore its boost our confident and ...
^^
Line 9, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... its boost our confident and self-esteem .In this regard, the writer takes a more ...
^^
Line 9, column 305, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ts boost our confident and self-esteem .In this regard, the writer takes a more di...
^^
Line 9, column 420, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the purpose of people who engage in such dangerous activities, is to hide their f...
^^
Line 9, column 486, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
... to hide their failure, for instance he mention the students whose grade are not good, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 22.412803532 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 261.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80459770115 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5802713212 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528735632184 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 21.2450331126 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 213.995231684 49.2860985944 434% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.142857143 110.228320801 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2857142857 21.698381199 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06452816374 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.497187456519 0.272083759551 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.297756783808 0.0996497079465 299% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869605825989 0.0662205650399 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326395201182 0.162205337803 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890306567049 0.0443174109184 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.3589403974 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 53.8541721854 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.0289183223 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.498013245 160% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.