Information technology is a blessing to us which is now standardize our home by making it smart, and providing lots of services that can be used in our offieces. There are both advantages and drawbacks of this developments, however, i think the benefits are capable enough to beat the shortcomings.
To begin with, using technical servise such as computer, TV, setelite, car, electric train, air condition, heater and so on. These things are made our lives one step forward. To illustrate, if we need any information, video clips, songs movies about any thing which exists in the would or maybe other planet, we have to search it in a computer and that will provide all kind of information about searched word. Concequently, we are having all types of information and other things which can give us knowledge and amusement. Moreover, it makes our personal life so enjoyable. For instance, when we go to home, we can get relaxed under an air cooler and watch movies with our family. Consequently, we get closer to each other and have a better understanding amongst us.
One the other hand, in online everything is not reliable and there is chance to get hacked or being cheated just using the information technology. Last year, for instance, the Rupali Bank, a renowned bank in Bangladesh, was hacked by some cyber criminal. Therefore, a huge amount of money was lost from here and the bank had to pay all for this.
In conclusion, there is a lots of benfits along with some drawback. However, i think if we strengthen the security of information technology there will be minor risks left.
- Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries many small local businesses are unable to compete some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities To what extend do you agree 78
- Buying things on the Internet such as books air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Nowadays technology is increasing being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. 73
- Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment such as South Pole Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'standardized'.
Suggestion: standardized
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
...ali Bank, a renowned bank in Bangladesh, was hacked by some cyber criminal. There...
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Message: Did you mean 'there are a lots'?
Suggestion: there are a lots
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Suggestion: a lot; lots
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85347985348 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81160288132 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7236775181 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168678146785 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583493979274 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707317130032 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112116407396 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734841691437 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.