Nowadays, scientists and tourists can travel to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Travelling to such places as the poles seemed to be unthinkable a few centuries ago. Now both scientists and tourists can do it, but is it a positive achievement? - I doubt it, and I am going to explain why.
When Roald Amundsen reached the South Pole and set up a Norwegian flag there, the whole world admired his courage and determination. Captain Scott and his team were less successful and unfortunately none of his companions managed to come back. The Сaptain’s diaries and letters to his unborn son cannot be read without tears and compassion. These are two remarkable examples of inn...
- The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider; the rich is becoming richer, and the poor are getting even poorer. 85
- People succeed because of their hard work; luck has nothing to do with success. 80
- Most leaders or directors generally belong to an older age group, but some people believe that young leaders are better. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion. 90
- In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reason for this? What problems might this cause in society? 80
- As the world’s supply of oil and natural gas continue to diminish, governments are constantly seeking alternatives to traditional energy resources, such as nuclear power. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? 80
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