THE PROPORTION OF SINGLE-CHILD FAMILIES IN CITIES, OUTSKIRTS AND RURAL AREAS OF CHINA 1980-2000
The bar chart provides information about the proportion of single-child families in cities, outskirts and rural areas of China between 1980 and 2000.
In the year 1980, the proportion of single-child families in cities and outskirts reached 50% and 40% respectively, the proportion in rural areas was only 10%.
Ten years later in 1990, the proportion in cities soared significantly from 50% to nearly 100%, almost doubled and that is rised 30% from 40% to 70%, while rural areas experienced a growth of only 10%, surged 20% of the total in those areas. Nevertheless, in the year 2000, the proportion rocketed considerably to 70%, three times more than that is in 1990, having greatly narrowed the gap between rural areas and the other two areas.
In 2000, almost all the families in cities and outskirts ave realized the purpose of one child in each family.
Obviously , there is still a long way to go before the proportion of single-child families in rural areas reaches the same level as that of cities and outskirts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... of one child in each family. Obviously , there is still a long way to go before ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93641618497 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73978242123 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531791907514 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.3264456929 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.333333333 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.622479523582 0.215688989381 289% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.334712383854 0.103423049105 324% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176801655317 0.0843802449381 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.382520112379 0.15604864568 245% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156058292343 0.0819641961636 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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