The graph below shows how elderly people in united states spent their free time between 1980 to 2010

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...s the regarding the number of adults who utilized their leisur time in five diffe...
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...leisur time in five different activities in the united states from 1980 to 2010.t...
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... the united states from 1980 to 2010.the data is calibrated in percentage. ...
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....the data is calibrated in percentage. Overall,it is clear that the crown signi...
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...centage. Overall,it is clear that the crown significance ha...
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...watching theatre. It is apparent that,the ratio of elderly people who utilize th...
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...pparent that,the ratio of elderly people who utilize their spare time in hiking a...
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... intial year and inclined drammatically.Then reached to the peak point in 2010 to ...
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... and inclined drammatically.Then reached to the peak point in 2010 to 80%. After...
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... drammatically.Then reached to the peak point in 2010 to 80%. After that ,60%of ...
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...e peak point in 2010 to 80%. After that ,60%of adults spent their their free time...
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... to 80%. After that ,60%of adults spent their their free time in watching tv while the pro...
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... spent their their free time in watching tv while the propotion of adults in watc...
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... propotion of adults in watching theatre was 50%.Apart from it, watching theatre ...
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... of adults in watching theatre was 50%.Apart from it, watching theatre activity ...
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... was 50%.Apart from it, watching theatre activity showed a downword trend and st...
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...tre activity showed a downword trend and stopped at 30%in the second yearand ...
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... 30%in the second yearand then increased slightly till the last year to about 7...
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...nd yearand then increased slightly till the last year to about 75%. With rega...
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...out 75%. With regards to elder people who were interested in reading activity ...
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... reading activity while having free time,it began at 30%in1980,then increased at40%...
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...tically to20%and incling sharply at 60%.At last,almost 5% of adults who spent the...
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... to20%and incling sharply at 60%.At last,almost 5% of adults who spent their spare tim...
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...incling sharply at 60%.At last,almost 5% of adults who spent their spare time in ...
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...nternet in the starting year.after that a,it increased gradually till 2000to nearl...
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...ternet in the starting year.after that a,it increased gradually till 2000to nearly1...
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...ually till 2000to nearly15%.surprisingly,there was a significant rise in the surfing o...
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...which percentage was half of the total.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, second, then, whereas, while, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48325358852 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23194319795 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607655502392 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.007457391 43.030603864 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 229.2 112.824112599 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.8 22.9334400587 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 1.69756097561 1649% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206878438644 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115941520857 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638014959191 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122637349687 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772580443784 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 13.2329268293 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 61.2550243902 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 11.4140731707 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.