Universities are providing online courses to the people of all over the world. It has both benefits and drawbacks but i think the positive side are more.
Giving online education have numerous advantages. Firstly, in can be taken by any students wherever they are and whenever they want according to the class schadule. To illustrate, students from any country such as Bangladesh, India, Denmark, can receive those classes providing from the University of Cambridge . One of my friends, for instance, is taking a course that is given by a renowned university of Canada in his preferred time evening. Consequenly, people are receiving their desired subject from their dreamed university and becaming a higher personnel in their country. Furthermore, the married people, especially houswives, are getting chances to further their education along with maintaining their family. Some wives are too much busy with their children and other members of family, and they are unable to go to any university or college in person to complete or bringing further their education. However, the online courses open a opportunity for them to learn from home. To give an example, a statistic shows that more than 25 tousand women, most of them were married, done their Master programme over online due to the lacking of time and scope. As a result of this huge amount of people are being emplyed and builfing their own career.
Nonetheless, online education have some shortcomings. Formost one it that there is no chance to get in touch with teacher or any classmates if students face difficulties with their study. However, this problem can be resolved by creating a group conversation after classes that will allow students to share thier problems and sort it out.
In. conclusion, the classes that provided online have a great opportunity for students of all across the globe. Some minor problem can resolved by group conference.
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Suggestion: programmes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, for instance, i think, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73720448212 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2807391096 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8235294118 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263639419974 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856995436661 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499393942304 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154641538761 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581538017846 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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