In this technological world it has been seen that television has become the most preferred option of people in their free time. Hence, it has made them lethargic and restricted from interacting with others. I think television has played a major role in making people passive. This essay will discuss the reasons and its impact on individuals.
To begin with, there are plethora of reasons of why people are having more fascinated towards it. The fundamental one is availability of large number of channels on television of every genre. As they can watch their favorite shows with just one press which never feel them bored and tired while watching Tv. Even, If they are not liking any show, they can change it and watch it from the huge channels like sports, movies, entertainment, knowledge etc. As a result, they sit in the same position for long hours which cause muscle pain and without any physical activity it makes body unfit and obese. Furthermore, people feel this activity as a relaxing activity and used to overcome their stress and tiredness.
Moreover, when people watch shows for long time, they surrounded themselves with the imaginations of shows especially children and youngsters. They are mentally indulge in fake world which directly impairs their physical and mental growth. Even in worst situation, they become social isolated as they prefer to spend time on watching it rather than to have some quality time with family and friends. Besides this, Due to introduction of reality shows, premiere of latest movies, live sports and music shows people do not bother to visit any other place for leisure time.
In conclusion, No doubt television played a vital role in enhancing knowledge and provide information about nation and world, but its excessive usage should be controlled so that people become physical active and social interacted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, while, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12091503268 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57537282251 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4482786564 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.928571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236732879332 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805041672101 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418059865486 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14260003508 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401585928078 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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