You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this.
In your letter:
• Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you
• What your expectations are from this work/office
• How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems
Dear Madam,
I hope you are doing. I am writing this letter with an intention to bring some issues which I have been facing for few days at work.
To start with, I am unable to work effectively because of internet connection. It is usually very slow, in fact, it sometimes disconnects from the network; thus, I do not finish my daily task and assignments on time. Therefore, my seniors are dissapointed because of my inefficiency, and they complaint about it to the senior manager.
I feel terrible to not able to accomplish my duties and being criticized for the same. I always thought of working with a strong wifi connectivity and supportive peers. I believe these challanges can be fixed by improving internet strength and speed, so that there would be no barrier while performing a particluar process. Moreover, advising seniors and tenures to encourage other employees to work hard and appreciating any task achievement can motivate workers to finish the work with maximum accuracy and on time.
I hope you would certainly take an action to forward this feedback and get the issues fixed.
Regards
John Williams
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| 2020-11-22 | Chirag Bhardwaj | 96 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...wifi connectivity and supportive peers. I believe these challanges can be fixed b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, i feel, in fact, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00529100529 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81968389788 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68253968254 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2947501149 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174973100519 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592503000709 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668582588566 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119536689295 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833437407049 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.