These six pie charts denote the amount of water consumption for various aims including, industrial, agriculture and domestic use in six divergent parts of the world namely, north and south America, Africa besides central Asia.
From the overall perspective, it is entirely palpable from the data supplied that all these varied parts of the world have consumed large amount of water in their agriculture area. However, clearly it is also extremely notable to mention that using water for industrial use has witnessed the least amount compared to other sections.
Taking an entire glance at first three charts, that are illustrating water usage percentage in north and south America as well as Europe, it is visible to note that among these three parts, south America has taken the lead as the most water consumer in farming activities at 71 percent, whereas Europe is the least water user in this similar sector by 32 percent.moreover, European people have used a lot amount of water in their industrial projects by 53 percent. Conversely South America has been recognized as a big saver in this part at 10 percent.
As statistically can be seen by second three figures demonstrating the percentage of water has been used by other parts of the earth namely Africa, Central Asia along with South East Asia. Surprisingly the amount of water which has consumed in farming activities for all these three parts is remarkably high at around 80 percent. On the strike contrast, water has been used considerably little at their homes by 7 to 9 percent in all these three parts of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, conversely, first, however, moreover, second, so, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98872180451 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6851817918 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545112781955 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 283.868780488 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.285430114 43.030603864 252% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.875 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.25 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.23603664747 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156123453391 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080311080615 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486705194387 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116923196391 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436252450894 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 61.2550243902 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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